Talkback: Nun whipping Archbishop
part 2

From:	jane	2001-10-10 14:33:00
Subject:	The Archbisop.Part 2
Comment:	Jim, Your talent shines out.I wasn't expecting that ending.All I can say is FANTASTIC !!! I await the next installment.. I didn't think you could beat part1 but you have excelled yourself.
From:	Nicky	2001-10-11 08:33:15
Subject:	Reverse verse
Comment:	Jim, I enjoyed the second part to your perverse verse. The twist at the end was very entertaining, but took the menacing and sinister atmosphere away that you'd built up in the first part - the premeditation with which he decided to execute his revenge also contributed to this. My fave line was 'Holy Fu' and your rhyming was, as always, inspired. Keep up the great work, but let's have more inauspicious curse verse!
From:	firefighter	2001-10-13 14:32:17
Subject:	archbishop and the nun
Comment:	does the nun refer to jane herself or just a wish from you...the verse is excellent whens the next installment ready also a very good site...
From:	Peter	2003-01-25 08:26:26
Subject:	Bishops and Clerics
Comment:	As a one time 'clerical gentleman' I see the importance of your words. Nothing new under the sun - it has always gone on and always will. Only the Almighty knows what goes on under those lavish robes. Perhaps the nun should beat the Archbishop.

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