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isolani | 2002-03-26 17:06:12 | | Subject: | nice chapter there | | Comment: | Nicely written. Well done. I was struck by the even lines and spacing of the letters. Good choice of font also. Paragraphs looked good, straight on the left side and jagged on the right. Dearth of pictures but I can live with that. |  | | | | From: |
Knoeier | 2002-04-20 09:52:17 | | Subject: | face to face | | Comment: | Faced with the Devil himself, Howard really has no options. With respect to shaping Gallie's image of himself, he probably did the best thing. It's a lot braver to just keep standing there and get your ass kicked (or I think it was the jaw in this case) than to just run away. Yeah, why not turn the other cheek as well? It's kind of degrading for Howie that Gallie's rape alarm probably saved his life but hey, what do you expect when you're confronted with a MARSHAL ARTS EXPERT (winks at eadon...) And it has the additional but considerable advantage of undergoing Gallie's treatment and care (although he probably had a different kind of 'treatment' in mind, but hey who knows what the future will bring...) And since that Shy Guy hit came out in I think 1995 it is actually known that there are girls who prefer guys with small mouths and big hearts as the dutchism goes...guys who don't raise their fists over every other remark...guys who count to ten before using military action...Maybe violence, both verbal and physical, is one of the important themes in the book. I mean, look at Greg's speech. When you leave out the swearwords, curses, and all the other profanities he actually says absolutely nothing! |  | | | Add your comment
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